I hope you enjoyed my story. Please leave me some feedback so I know how to improve.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi Maia,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story and thought your ending was really good as I am now wondering what is in Paddingtons bag, so will there be a part 2 to this story?
Regards
Leanne
Kia ora Maia! Wow, what a lovely story you have written.The picture you have used really captures your audiences attention, great choice!
ReplyDeleteNext time it would be great to see you using more descriptive language, which I know you can do!
I hope you plan on adding more to this story as I can't wait to hear about his big adventure!