Similes are sentences describing something with like or as. E.G.
The stars where as bright as the moon.
Metaphors are sentences saying something is it but
really it is not.
E.G. The flowers were dancing in the wind.
Setting
Before we start I will tell you our names. These are our names, Tom, Jerry, Bob,
Milly, Lily and last but certainly not least little Jim Bob Jr.
We call ourselves The Night Thieves. So our destination is the wonderful, beautiful,
Queen's castle to steal her sparkly, shining, shimmering Jewellery.
Story
As we speed off along the long road not stopping for anything we see a big shining red car speeding past. The car was as big and loud as a big elephant stomping. We carry on our mission to the queen's castle. Our car then breaks down and we are left to walk so we stole a car and sped off down the street. We arrived at our destination and stopped the car. We then raced as fast as our little legs could take us into her castle. We managed to get past all the guards and not get caught by any cameras or set off any alarms. It took 3 whole people to carry one necklace because they were so big. The then stacked the car and took off to their home. They enter ad leave the great big city using one drainage hole with a big mat covering it so no rain or water got in.
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