As I look at the humongous waves crashing against the water as it comes towards the shore. It looks like dogs racing for a basket of dog food. I walk out to the shallow water and hesitate and look at the waves that are like triple the size of me. I then slowly walk back up to the shore. I stand on a shell and scream with excruciating pain. I go to the water to wash all the sand of my feet and check for blood. Luckily there was no blood and there was only a tiny cut. I then see an ice cream truck and go running letting my beautiful long hair fly behind me as I make a run for the truck. I get a double cone with vanilla ice cream drizzled with chocolate sauce with 2 flakes and sprinkles on top. After I eat my ice cream I go back down to the water. The sea had calmed down a lot now so I went in and started jumping over the waves. A big wave came and bowled me over like a bowling ball knocking over a bowling pin. I go under the water and can hardly breathe. The waves then get really strong and I am held down by the pressure of the waves. I then see some fish leading a friendly dolphin to me I get saved by the dolphin and I land on the shore.
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